Lugnasa Autumn Moon
The morning changing point of view, cleaning up word choices, still considering major edits. Through several scenes. At times this work energizes me, at other times it makes me yawn, want to lie down and take a nap. Not sure I’ve completely arrived in the land of revision, though I’m making my way through the book, learning as I go.
There is quite a bit to add, the ending needs expansion and then parsing out among the rest.
Just finished reviewing my Aeneid translation. Scratching my head, not able to clarify some jumbled syntax. Sometimes I feel I’ve made great progress, then it reaches up and slaps me. Facility still seems a long way off right now.
