Summer Moon of the First Harvests
Most of the day on Missing. As I near the end of this revision, the stakes get higher for the story. I’ve cut out a lot at the end, a whole story line in order to make Missing focus on, well, missing. I had what I considered some exciting stuff near the end, sort of a teaser for Loki’s Children, but that’s gone. Now the satisfaction with Missing stands or falls on its primary narrative, a missing boy and the search for him.